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[bipper]

I would like some advice/feedback on a drawing I have been working on.

I don't claim to be any good; but I would just like to know where is stand as a wannabe artist Please be brutally honest...

Well here it goes Just check out the link below plz.

http://www.riversedgecs.com/img-bin/Siene.gif

Thanks a tonner guys/gals/things

Bipper

EDIT: ok just put up a link as when i post it gets utterly huge Thx for any patience