The First EoFF Battle Of The Sexes Showdown! ~GIRLS WIN!~

[Aerith's Knight]

OK smurf it i'll submit something... i might get lucky and a judge might be feeling generous

Team: Male
Category: Poser... aparantley that's totally allowed



I spotted something semi-amusing off camera nahh, i'm going for laid back and and "don't interupt me being cool"

Yeaaaah, so I'm the male judge... Pictures of guys don't really do it for me. The shirts ok, I guess.

Score: 3/10

Category: Writing (Poetry)


I feel a creature stirring, deep within my troubled thoughts,
Unleashing fear i can't control, for i know it can't be fought,

Howling eerily in its wake, it knows its purpose and its cause,
It knows not fear nor weakness, only its new found course,

Every question falls behind as the new day is dawning,
The creature rises and transpires a revolutionary warning,

Its sight not hindered nor deceived by the mist of haunting phantoms,
Guiding me through and safely away from dark and shrouding intentions,

I follow without question as i am lead into its world,
A place of unfamiliar truths, where nothing lies untold,

The darker thoughts within my mind are defeated, forever banished,
Loneliness, confusion, fear and hatred did but simply vanish,

My nightmares fade as i am freed from tormenting resentment,
The creature slumbers as i wake, in a valley of crystal contentment.

It's okay (a little emo, maybe), try to spell-check entries though.

Score: 5/10

[Shlup]

I tried to make something but then I remembered I'm not talented. Maybe I'll find some photos or something.

[Depression Moon]

I guess I can do a little something something. I can submit poetry, but I think I'm a better story writer. What length are stories set to?

[Aerith's Knight]

Too long, I get bored and start subtracting points. I have to read it ALL.

[Marshall Banana]

Guess what!? I have cramps today (OH POO DON'T DELETE MY POST).

Alrighty then, this looks like a bit of fun, so here it goes!

Team: Male
Category: Art


Description:
"Self Doubt"
This would have to be the saddest and most depressing piece of my high school folio. This is because at the time I came up with the idea for this piece, all my closest friends were in happy successful relationships, and to me its a very strange feeling to be the the odd one out. So I started doubting myself as whatever I was trying with girls at the time and in the past had not worked, so I started feeling lonely, like I had no-one to talk to about it, because I didn't want to talk about such negative things to my friends who were doing so well in their relationships. So this time was very depressing and inward self critisizing of myself. (part taken from deviantArt description)
Now a few yeaars on I use it as a bit of a motivational piece, to keep going/working at things, and just to rememeber that time and all I learnt from it.

If I can sumbit 2 things as long as they are in different categories, I will sumbit the poem I wrote to accompany the above drawing.


Category: Writting

"Is It Possible..."

Is it possible to be alone?
Forever?
To be ignored?
Uncared for?
Not be loved?
Is it because I’m not cool?
Not loud enough?
Not nice enough?
Don’t care enough?
What have I done wrong?
What am I doing wrong?
Am I ugly?
Do I scare you?
Why am I not what you want?
Why doesn’t anyone like me for me?
Is there someone out there for me?
They must not be around here,
Where are you?
What do I have to do to find you?
I continue to look for you…


Description:
Not too much to say, I think it speaks for itself. This was the poem I wrote one day in biology class, which inspired the drawing above. Pretty negative/self critasizing, but thats how silly I felt back then :P



So theres something to get the ball rolling, feel a bit strange being the first to put something up...

Your art: Wow! You draw good. I'm afraid I have to give you 10/10.
Your poem: I think it's too straightforward. 4/10.

http://forums.eyesonff.com/album.php?albumid=224


My Thesis work and soon to be ready production order bags! ^_^

I love crafts, and you're a handsome fellow. 10/10.

OK smurf it i'll submit something... i might get lucky and a judge might be feeling generous

Team: Male
Category: Poser... aparantley that's totally allowed



I spotted something semi-amusing off camera nahh, i'm going for laid back and and "don't interupt me being cool"

Category: Writing (Poetry)


I feel a creature stirring, deep within my troubled thoughts,
Unleashing fear i can't control, for i know it can't be fought,

Howling eerily in its wake, it knows its purpose and its cause,
It knows not fear nor weakness, only its new found course,

Every question falls behind as the new day is dawning,
The creature rises and transpires a revolutionary warning,

Its sight not hindered nor deceived by the mist of haunting phantoms,
Guiding me through and safely away from dark and shrouding intentions,

I follow without question as i am lead into its world,
A place of unfamiliar truths, where nothing lies untold,

The darker thoughts within my mind are defeated, forever banished,
Lonliness, confusion, fear and hatred did but simply vanish,

My nightmares fade as i am freed from tormenting resentment,
The creature slumbers as i wake, in a valley of crystal contentment.




Though it affects us all differently, we're all hit pretty hard when someone breaks our heart. Whether you put on a face or lock yourself away, whether we continue with our lives or lose our way, whether we are grateful for what we had or resentful that we lost it, we all find our way back. I havn't come up with a good title for this poem if anyone has any nice ideas?

Your pose: You're a handsome fellow, too. 10/10.
Your poem: Well, it rhymes! I like "crystal contentment," too. 6/10.

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Hey, Shluppi! You made Under the Sea and Fluffy Puff, and they're the prettiest skins we have! That's talent!

[Rantz]

I don't know it this is an okay thing to submit (for "Other"), but let's try it!

Pattern maker

[Christmas]

I guess I can do a little something something. I can submit poetry, but I think I'm a better story writer. What length are stories set to?

Maybe not too long, quality over quantity. But if you want to post a long story, I am ok with it and will read everything so no worries!

Too long, I get bored and start subtracting points. I have to read it ALL.

Ignore him, even if he subtract points, there are still 2 more judges and one chief judge to make up for it!

BTW, no one had put up any performances related work yet? C'mom, some bit of videos and stuff to spice this up!!??

EDIT: BTW, now is 100 to 0.

[Shlup]

MB gave me a brilliant idea.

Team: Female
Category: Others (Culinary Arts)



Description: Here you will see three dozen cupcakes. They are funfetti, as that is the favorite cupcake flavor of every male in America. They were deemed delectable by those who consumed them.

And our team name shall be Pink Ninjas.

[Aerith's Knight]

I have no idea what I'm looking at, it looks both tasty and like a bite of diabetes. xD

Still, pretty good, and doing what women do best, baking and cooking.

Score: 7/10

[NorthernChaosGod]

Shlup, those look delicious!

This really makes me wish I had some decent recording equipment to post some music. D:

[Shin Gouken]

Your poem: Well, it rhymes! I like "crystal contentment," too. 6/10.

Not bad comments on the poem overall... could of been worse

But this...

Your pose: You're a handsome fellow, too. 10/10.

just made my day

[Zeldy]

Hhhhhhhmmmmmmm, I'll see if I have anything..

[Aerith's Knight]

I don't know it this is an okay thing to submit (for "Other"), but let's try it!

Pattern maker

How fun, entertained me for at least a minute. But, for a man of your skills, it wasn't that much effort to code it.

Score: 7/10

[Rantz]

Shlup, those look like overcooked spaghetti that a bronchitis patient coughed on. 0/10

[Christmas]

Alrighty then, this looks like a bit of fun, so here it goes!

Team: Male
Category: Art


Description:
"Self Doubt"
This would have to be the saddest and most depressing piece of my high school folio. This is because at the time I came up with the idea for this piece, all my closest friends were in happy successful relationships, and to me its a very strange feeling to be the the odd one out. So I started doubting myself as whatever I was trying with girls at the time and in the past had not worked, so I started feeling lonely, like I had no-one to talk to about it, because I didn't want to talk about such negative things to my friends who were doing so well in their relationships. So this time was very depressing and inward self critisizing of myself. (part taken from deviantArt description)
Now a few yeaars on I use it as a bit of a motivational piece, to keep going/working at things, and just to rememeber that time and all I learnt from it.

If I can sumbit 2 things as long as they are in different categories, I will sumbit the poem I wrote to accompany the above drawing.


Category: Writting

"Is It Possible..."

Is it possible to be alone?
Forever?
To be ignored?
Uncared for?
Not be loved?
Is it because I’m not cool?
Not loud enough?
Not nice enough?
Don’t care enough?
What have I done wrong?
What am I doing wrong?
Am I ugly?
Do I scare you?
Why am I not what you want?
Why doesn’t anyone like me for me?
Is there someone out there for me?
They must not be around here,
Where are you?
What do I have to do to find you?
I continue to look for you…


Description:
Not too much to say, I think it speaks for itself. This was the poem I wrote one day in biology class, which inspired the drawing above. Pretty negative/self critasizing, but thats how silly I felt back then :P



So theres something to get the ball rolling, feel a bit strange being the first to put something up...

Really awesome drawing! And I like the description behind it! Hope it will alway stay motivational to you!

Score: 3/5

Not a bad poem, but I do prefer the drawing more! Still, this doesn't mean your poem isn't good!!

Score: 1/5

http://forums.eyesonff.com/album.php?albumid=224


My Thesis work and soon to be ready production order bags! ^_^

It's really creative!! And I am a big fan for creative products!!! Hope you can share more of your work with us!!

Score: 3/5

OK smurf it i'll submit something... i might get lucky and a judge might be feeling generous

Team: Male
Category: Poser... aparantley that's totally allowed



I spotted something semi-amusing off camera nahh, i'm going for laid back and and "don't interupt me being cool"

Category: Writing (Poetry)


I feel a creature stirring, deep within my troubled thoughts,
Unleashing fear i can't control, for i know it can't be fought,

Howling eerily in its wake, it knows its purpose and its cause,
It knows not fear nor weakness, only its new found course,

Every question falls behind as the new day is dawning,
The creature rises and transpires a revolutionary warning,

Its sight not hindered nor deceived by the mist of haunting phantoms,
Guiding me through and safely away from dark and shrouding intentions,

I follow without question as i am lead into its world,
A place of unfamiliar truths, where nothing lies untold,

The darker thoughts within my mind are defeated, forever banished,
Lonliness, confusion, fear and hatred did but simply vanish,

My nightmares fade as i am freed from tormenting resentment,
The creature slumbers as i wake, in a valley of crystal contentment.




Though it affects us all differently, we're all hit pretty hard when someone breaks our heart. Whether you put on a face or lock yourself away, whether we continue with our lives or lose our way, whether we are grateful for what we had or resentful that we lost it, we all find our way back. I havn't come up with a good title for this poem if anyone has any nice ideas?

Hahaha, your photo make me blush. You are really pretty handsome and manly in the photo! But it is a pity you are looking another way instead at the camera or else all the girls will be screaming!

Score: 3/5

Your poem kinda rhymes! So you are good looking and poetic?

Score: 1/5

I don't know it this is an okay thing to submit (for "Other"), but let's try it!

Pattern maker

That program of your is pretty kinda entertaining! A good way to pass time if you want to draw random patterns one fine afternoon with no particular purposes.

Score: 3/5

MB gave me a brilliant idea.

Team: Female
Category: Others (Culinary Arts)



Description: Here you will see three dozen cupcakes. They are funfetti, as that is the favorite cupcake flavor of every male in America. They were deemed delectable by those who consumed them.

And our team name shall be Pink Ninjas.

The cakes look realy delicious but too bad I won't be able to taste it.

Score: 3/5