The Adventures of Ed...5!

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11-09-2006, 10:42 PM
Sephex

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The Adventures of Ed...5!

The final part to this story. I will be making more, but they will probably be stand alone comics, not more story (unless I think of something that's worth it). I have all of them attached for the new people. The fifth attachment is the new one. Enjoy!
11-09-2006, 10:47 PM
Cruise Control

xDDD. Where's the rest?
11-09-2006, 10:58 PM
Flying Mullet

Belto makes me happy. :)

The missing fifth attachment makes me sad. :(
11-09-2006, 11:03 PM
Strider

Oh, Ed.
11-09-2006, 11:04 PM
Cruise Control

I really want the other 4 parts...
11-09-2006, 11:12 PM
edczxcvbnm

Totally smurfing awesome. That is so what I would have said and done :D
11-09-2006, 11:17 PM
Sephex

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flying Mullet

Belto makes me happy. :)

The missing fifth attachment makes me sad. :(

All of them should be there. If this problem continues I will post the newest one in her directly, though it will take up a lot of space.

EDIT: Screw it. I hope it doesn't crash, though. No one attempt to save it please, so it can stay up!

http://www.geocities.com/sephex123/no5.txt
11-10-2006, 06:07 AM
edczxcvbnm

I didn't notice before...but Belto has belts floating in the background of his fire storm XD
11-10-2006, 01:21 PM
Loony BoB

Beautiful. Just beautiful.
11-10-2006, 02:03 PM
Decessus

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Originally Posted by Strider

Oh, Ed.
11-10-2006, 02:18 PM
Tavrobel

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Originally Posted by Decessus

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Originally Posted by Strider

Oh, Ed.
11-10-2006, 02:55 PM
The Devil Man

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Originally Posted by Tavrobel

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Originally Posted by Decessus

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Originally Posted by Strider

Oh, Ed.
11-10-2006, 11:34 PM
Sephex

Thanks to everyone that has been following this. As I have already said, I plan on continuing this comic. Just wanted to drop by and thank everyone for their support! :)
11-10-2006, 11:46 PM
Vincent, Thunder God

Since you've gotten a lot of good reviews, I guess it's finally safe for me to have my say. Ever since the first "Adventures of Ed" I wanted to say this, but I didn't want to insult you. Just take what I say with a grain of salt, OK?

I haven't enjoyed these comics much. The jokes are slightly amusing at best, the art is only so-so, and the story arc is uninspired and predictable. That having been said, you've improved from the start to end, and I think you can improve even more if you're going to continue. The point I hope you can work on the most is some better joke material.

I really hope you can take this for another opinion and not see it as rude. I'm not trying to be too negative.
11-10-2006, 11:49 PM
Sephex

That's fine. Kepp in mind that I do tend to try to write around Ed's real life personality blended with how I believe people on the net percieve him. The art is crap because I can't draw that well, so I decided to make it look all kiddy, though, I have noticed an improvement my writing, as you have pointed out. Thank you for your honesty.
11-11-2006, 01:09 AM
Christmas

I think it is the story and jokes that matters, the art isn't that important at least for me.
:bigsmile:
11-11-2006, 01:19 AM
Jigsaw

edczxcvbnm is smurfin' crazy. Nice stuff, Sephex.