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    New stuff already! I must say, I'm proud to present the next drawing. I don't know what it is, but I feel very content with the angle and overall atmosphere. I'm a bit less satisfied with the ground, but the clouds, smoke, angle and figure are all exactly as how I imagined it.

    So anyway, please enjoy and criticize what might just be my personal favourite;
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    hahahaha oh my god let me drain some of your gypsy magic *claws*

    Seriously I adore that so much. Only issue is I feel the lines on the fields - esp. the boundaries - could be a little cleaner, finer and more defined. That picture is so beautiful.

    I think it could work with some colour maybe?

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    Thanks scrumpleberry! You're right about the linework in the ground, I've been too impatient.

    Colouring is a good idea, but I don't really have a lot of time on my hands lately. Maybe it's time for another collab with blackorb, might he be interested!

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    here's another one, it was kind of an experiment using reflection, but I kinda like it. Inspired by Pink Floyd, enjoy!
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    Lovely, but I think the wiggly camera thing should be more prominent and show/have more detail, or there should be more going on in the foreground. Fabulous smudgings

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    Wow, marvellous!

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    I love the guy walking away. I enjoy all the symbolism in your art. The same message displayed over and over again in different ways.

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    Thanks everyone!

    Here's one inspired by these bullboards (pun intended) you come across while driving through Spain. There's actually quite a lot of those throughout the landscape and they make awesome sights and story material.

    Anyway, I took it to the extreme. Enjoy!
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    Your clouds are, as usual, astounding. Unfortunately, your only real downside is the quality of the land in your drawings like this. Spend a bit more effort making the land as realistic as the clouds and it'd be amazing, but as it is it just looks like you've quickly sketched the land in order to get to the clouds/horn/person quicker. I don't mean to be negative or anything, and I hope this is taken as constructive criticism because the fact remains that I am a big fan.

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    It's been a while, but here's some new stuff! The first one is part #4 of a series of drawings featuring the guy with the helicopter hat. The second one will be used as an album cover. Enjoy and critisize please!
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    Wow. I honestly can't think of any constructive criticism. Hell, I can't even think of destructive criticism! Definitely your best, in my opinion!

    If possible, I'd love to see the fjel one with a light flash from the lighthouse. My eye is kind of drawn to that area simply because nothing's happening. It may be that this ruins it, but it's something to consider, at least!

    That's literally the only thing I can think to mention. Very very well done!

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    Excellent as always, Pete!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pete for President View Post
    The second one will be used as an album cover.
    >>> That one is awesome..
    >> The black orb glitters ominously... but nothing happens..

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    Thanks everyone! More to come soon.

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    New drawing! Once again featuring the helicopter kid. I'm about halfway through drawing a story about this character. Anyway, comments and critics always appreciated!
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