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Thread: A sketch of Lightning (sorry for the bad quality)

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    Default A sketch of Lightning (sorry for the bad quality)

    Sorry I had to take picture from my cell. This is basically what the thread title says.

    There's something about her face that does not look like Lightning, but I can't seem to figure it out. And I was wandering if anyone has any advice? Thanks!!
    I've laid my memories and dreams upon those wings..

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    Her upper lip is too full, her eyes not deep-set enough, and you should bring out the bridge of her nose?

    pretty good likeness otherwise, though

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    Mouth is too narrow and her lips are supposed to be slightly open, not pursed.

    Either way, it's an incredible drawing.

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    Very nice sketch!

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    The nose is the main thing I noticed. It's a little too small and rounded compared to the picture. Smaller point: your ear is more pointed.

    But has already been said, it's a great drawing.

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    Everything I could see has already been pointed out xD

    A very beautiful sketch regardless. ~Thumbs up~ :3

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