I have such a hard time accepting that this piece of trash even exists, and a harder time reading about the absurdities of it all. I think it casts an incredibly terrible, offensive light on people who choose to live these lifestyles and reading about all of the author's details of them all in conjunction to Ana's horrible, timid, plain personality just puts a bad taste in my mouth, as if only feeble, "innocent", naive women who don't know any better would be interested in consent to any of it. I don't like it at all.

This isn't a criticism about your commentary, though, dear, just the content of the story. You're doing a fine job.