Arr, that be fine work done with plenty of improvement in such a short while! It seriously does look a hundred times better than the last drawing.

To be just a minor nitpick now, because I really think you did a lot: yeah, get those eyepatches checked. The belt looks a little strange because while most everything else has a lot of detail, it does not. And I think your thumb on that left is curving the wrong way if he's holding out a hand to demand booty or whatnot.

Very, very good work. Cheers.